Friday, October 27, 2006

42/b descendent of 99 - here & 42/a is here

Blinds & Patience

parting over delay
long shade relies

on enough setting
of up chalked

marks with themselves
colourfully cracked

/I drew you in pastel hues that didn’t suit your complexion and when the snap came, it was too much to expect reliability from a sketch/

2 comments:

Clifford Duffy said...

Am I the first to comment here, on your blog, which I found by way of this blog, and that one, finding here,
'parting over delay
long shade relies'

a couplet of thought perception
and

'on enough setting
of up chalked' to hear in this a delicate trace of school black boards


'marks with themselves
colourfully cracked' the our in colour as rich as the pastel you're suggesting in

'/I drew you in pastel hues that didn't suit your/
complexion and when the snap came, it too much to/expect reliabilty from a sketch/'
astonished wordless at moment like this
as reading your word-tales microbits
of perceptual tales and takes

Clifford Duffy said...

Am I the first to comment here, on your blog, which I found by way of this blog, and that one, finding here,
'parting over delay
long shade relies'

a couplet of thought perception
and

'on enough setting
of up chalked' to hear in this a delicate trace of school black boards


'marks with themselves
colourfully cracked' the our in colour as rich as the pastel you're suggesting in

'/I drew you in pastel hues that didn't suit your/
complexion and when the snap came, it too much to/expect reliabilty from a sketch/'
astonished wordless at moment like this
as reading your word-tales microbits
of perceptual tales and takes